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Workers’ Responses on Day Care Center in X Company

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The data in Table 1 indicates a significant differently in the comments of female and male on Day Care Center of the X Company. It is obvious that most of women satisfied with the Day Care with 80%; while, the figure for men showed the opposite pattern with just well under a third. Another fact worth noticing is that the percentage of women saying no is just 15 percent; meanwhile, over a half of men showed the disappointed with the Day Care. There were only 5% of women and 15% of men did not have the answer for the survey. In conclusion, the numbers of female are generally agreed with the daycare in company X while men were not happy with this decision.
The data in Table 1 indicates a significant
differently
in the comments of female and male on Day Care Center of the X
Company
. It is obvious that
most of women
satisfied with the Day Care with 80%; while, the figure for
men
showed
the opposite pattern with
just
well under a third. Another fact worth noticing is that the percentage of women saying
no
is
just
15 percent; meanwhile, over a half of
men
showed
the disappointed with the Day Care. There were
only
5% of women and 15% of
men
did not have the answer for the survey.
In conclusion
, the numbers of female are
generally
agreed
with the daycare in
company
X while
men
were not happy with this decision.
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