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Map showing changes in a town

Map showing changes in a town GLKVw

The two maps illustrates the significant changes which the town of Kimsville has been experienced lately, between the year 2002 and today. Overall, It apears that Kimsville has been experienced slight modernizations indeed there’re more transportation and entertainment facilities available besides it might be better job opprtunities as well. One notable change is that the factory near the city centre has been pulled down in order to make way for a great software company. Another striking change is the conversion of the old cinema which has been made into a pub, hence people could spend their spare time there. North-west and south-west of the town used to be green whereas, the trees have been cut down and some new apartments and also a new football stadium have been constructed respevtively. The final main development has been the erection of the new train station in the west of town which helps to expand the use of public transportation

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changes
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Kimsville
 has been experienced
 lately, between the year 2002 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
.

Overall
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apears
 that Possible spelling mistake found.KnoxvilleHinesvilleLiouvilleTitusvillePinevilleRitzville
Kimsville
 has been experienced
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modernizations
indeed
 there’re more transportation and entertainment facilities available besides
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opprtunities
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.

One notable This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 is that the factory near the city Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 has been pulled
 down in order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 way for a great software This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
. Another striking This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 is the conversion of the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 cinema which has been made
 into a pub, hence
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 could spend their spare time there.

North-west and south-west of the town This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to be green whereas, the trees have been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 down and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 new apartments and also
 a new football stadium have been constructed
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respevtively
. The final main development has been the erection of the new train station in the west of town which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 to expand the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
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transportation