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Work from home patterns from males and females

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The chart mentioned here illustrates varied reasons for people opting to work from home. It also depicts how reasons for males are different from females. Overall it is observed that, top most reason for work from home is saving money for both the genders, but other reasons like enhancing productivity and taking care of children are next on the list. When it comes to enhancing productivity, males are much more focused on this reason in comparison to females. On the other females are more concerned towards taking care of their childerns. The study also shows that males are females are using work from home option just about 10 hours in a week, however males are using this option for over 30 hours in a week. The numbers of males and females working from home for 10 to 30 hours in a week is almost same.
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are using this option for over 30 hours in a week. The numbers of
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working from home for 10 to 30 hours in a week is almost same.
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IELTS academic Work from home patterns from males and females

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