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The bar chart illustrates art galleries and their popularity among visitors in 2011. Overall, the Louvre in France has the most visitors, in contracts of the State Hermitage in Russia As it show, the Louvre in France had the most visitor, around 8. 8 million. There second most popular was the Metropolitan Museum in USA with 6 million people came to visit in 2011, followed to closely by British Museum in UK with a number being around 5. 8 million. However, just above 3 million visitors came to National museum of Korea, which is only about half of the Metropolitan Museum and the British Museum, and only approximately one-third compared to Louvre museum. Similarly to Museo del Prado in Spain and the State Hermitage (3 million and about 2. 9) million visitors)

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