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The bar chart illustrates art galleries and their popularity among visitors in 2011. It is clear that the Louvre from France visited by a large number of tourists whereas the State Hermitage’s reputation went otherwise. It is evidence from the chart that, in 2011, in first place was the Louvre of France with nearly 9 million visitors followed by the Metropolitan museum of USA with 6. 6 million art viewers. There are hardly any difference for the British museum compared to that of the USA. All three galleries of Korea, Spain and Russia are good; however, their visit rates are only one third of the Louvre at around 3 million visitors per year.

The bar chart illustrates art galleries and their popularity among visitors in 2011.

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It is evidence from the chart that, in 2011, in first
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 with 6. 6 million art viewers. There are hardly any difference for the British museum compared to that of the USA. All three galleries of Korea, Spain and Russia are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
; however
, their visit rates are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 one third of the Louvre at around 3 million visitors per year. 