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With the advances in science and technology, people from different ends of the world can communicate with each other. What is your opinion on the impact of technologies on our lives? Do you think that these advances only result in positive outcomes?

With the advances in science and technology, people from different ends of the world can communicate with each other. What is your opinion on the impact of technologies on our lives? Do you think that these advances only result in positive outcomes? xlKo
In today’s world, we see that technology and science are evolving in our day to day life with rapid growth. Technology has impacted our lives which has improved our Lifestyles in positive aspects. Definitely these results in positive outcomes which I’ll further describe in this essay. Firstly, technology has made our communication skills far more effective than before bestowing internet calls, emails. Wifi, internet given our technology a different direction. For instance, today I’m able to call my grandfather who’s 1000 miles away and communicate with him about anything. According to me, advancing in technology is stepping up towards superior lifestyles. Although, this is also resulting in less face to face talks. Secondly, gps and google maps are best example for people of different area who are able to travel through to meet your loved ones. Many people have different jobs in different countries which made impossible for them to connect and go to those untraveled areas, but due to gps and google map they are easy to find the places. For example, I have never been to Toronto but due to google maps travelling is comfortable to those places. In conclusion, I strongly believe that upgrading in technology is resulting in positive growth. It’s getting convenient for numerous pupils to get connected through phones and making communication skills good.
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technology
and science are evolving in our
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life with rapid growth.
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Technology
has impacted our
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our Lifestyles in
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positive
aspects. Definitely these results in
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positive
outcomes which I’ll
further
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describe
in this essay.

Firstly
,
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technology
has made our communication
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skills
far more effective than
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before
bestowing internet calls, emails.
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Wifi
, internet
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given
our
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technology
a
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different
direction.
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,
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today
I’m able to call my grandfather who’s
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1000 miles
away and communicate with him about anything.
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According to me
, advancing in
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technology
is stepping up towards superior lifestyles. Although, this is
also
resulting in less face to face talks.

Secondly
,
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gps
and
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google maps
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area who are able to travel through to
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meet
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people
have
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different
jobs in
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different
countries which made impossible for them to connect and go to those untraveled areas,
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but
due to
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gps
and google map they are easy to find the places.
For example
, I have never been to Toronto
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but
due to google maps travelling is comfortable to those places.

In conclusion
, I
strongly
believe that upgrading in
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technology
is resulting in
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positive
growth. It’s getting convenient for numerous pupils to
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get
connected through phones and making communication
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skills
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good
.
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IELTS academic With the advances in science and technology, people from different ends of the world can communicate with each other. What is your opinion on the impact of technologies on our lives? Do you think that these advances only result in positive outcomes?

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