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The graph below shows the percentage of part-time workers in each country of the United Kingdom in 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the percentage of part-time workers in each country of the United Kingdom in 1980 and 2010. B6Ap
The graph demonstrates the rates of part-time workers in the counties (England, Nothern Ireland, Scotland and Wales) of the United Kingdom in the years of 1980 and 2010. Overall it is clearly seen that there is an increase in part-time workers from 1980 to 2010, except Northern Ireland. In addition to this, England and Wales have more part-time employees than Northern Ireland and Scotland both in the years of 1980 and 2010. In 1980, 25% of people in England worked part time. The only country with greater percentages of part-time workers was Wales, with around 33%. Both countries saw an increase in the rates of people working part time in 2010. In England, the percentages rose to over 30% and in Wales percentages rose to just over 35%. Scotland had the smallest percentage of part-time workers in 1980, with just over ten per cent. However, this rose to almost 20% in 2010 which is a large increase. Lastly, Northern Ireland was the only country which had a decreasing percentage of part-time workers. In 1980, it had around 15% of people in part-time work. This decreased by a couple of per cent in 2010.
The graph demonstrates the rates of part-time
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workers
in the counties (England,
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Nothern
Ireland, Scotland and Wales) of the United Kingdom in the years of 1980 and 2010.

Overall
it is
clearly
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that there is an increase in part-time
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workers
from 1980 to 2010, except Northern Ireland.
In addition
to this, England and Wales have more part-time employees than Northern Ireland and Scotland both in the years of 1980 and 2010.

In 1980, 25% of
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people
in England worked
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part time
. The
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country with greater
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percentages
of part-time
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workers
was Wales, with around 33%. Both countries
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saw
an increase in the rates of
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people
working
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part time
in 2010. In England, the
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percentages
rose to over 30% and in Wales
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percentages
rose to
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over 35%.

Scotland had the smallest
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percentage
of part-time
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workers
in 1980, with
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over ten per cent.
However
, this rose to almost 20% in 2010 which is a large increase.
Lastly
, Northern Ireland was the
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only
country which had a decreasing
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percentage
of part-time
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workers
. In 1980, it had around 15% of
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people
in part-time work. This decreased by a couple of per cent in 2010.

IELTS academic The graph below shows the percentage of part-time workers in each country of the United Kingdom in 1980 and 2010.

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