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winter and summer highest ranking medal winners of all time

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The provided barchart indicates the comparison of the number and the type of medals which has been achieved by 5 selected countries in winter Olympics. In contrast, the presented line graph depicts which nations won the most medals in summer olympics. A glance at the shown datas reveal that Norway and then USA have gaind the most medals in winter olympic games. As can be seen, USA have conserved its station in summer olympic games compare to France which won the least number of medals between shown countries in the graph. Norway, has the highest position as gaining over 300 medals equally in terms of gold, silver and brone types during the winter olympics. How ever canada, have achieved just over 15 medals over the same period. On the other hand, USA, which is the second highest country in winter olympics, has won over 2000 medals in summer olympics, having stood at the first rank among other shown countries. In addition, the nmber of medals USSR and Germany won, have increased significantly from under and over 200 medals in winter to approximatly 1000 and under 1000 medals in summer olympics respectively. to sum up, the result of each olympic games are very different, with Norway hitting a peak in winter games and USA, Germany and USSR being uccessful in both.
The provided
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barchart
indicates the comparison of the number and the type of
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medals
which has
been achieved
by 5 selected
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countries
in
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winter
Olympics.
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, the presented line graph depicts which nations won the most
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medals
in
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summer
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olympics
. A glance at the shown
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datas
reveal that Norway and then USA have
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gaind
the most
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medals
in
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winter
olympic
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games
. As can be
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, USA have conserved its station in
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summer
olympic
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compare to France which won the least number of
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medals
between shown
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countries
in the graph. Norway, has the highest position as gaining
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over
300
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medals
equally
in terms of gold, silver and
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brone
types during the
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winter
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olympics
.
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canada
, have achieved
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15
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medals
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the same period.
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, USA, which is the second highest
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country
in
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winter
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olympics
, has won
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2000
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, having stood at the
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nmber
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USSR and Germany won, have increased
significantly
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200
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winter
to
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approximatly
1000 and under 1000
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olympics
respectively
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to
sum up, the result of each olympic
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are
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different
, with Norway hitting a peak in
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winter
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and USA, Germany and USSR being
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uccessful
in both.
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IELTS academic winter and summer highest ranking medal winners of all time

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