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country medal leaders in Badminton and Rowing

country medal leaders in Badminton and Rowing MB0GL

The provided bar chart indicates the number and the type of medals having been won in Badminton in several selected countries. In contrast, the presented pie chart depicts some successful areas in Rowing. A glance at the data reveals that China has been the first leader in Badminton in terms of the total reward it has achieved. while the USA is the first at sailing. The number of gold and generally total reward China has won is significantly higher than other countries, at merely over 5 and under 30 respectively in comparison with Malaysia having stood at the lowest position with no gold medals. On the other hand, the USA and then Great Britain are the first gold leaders in paddle compare to Italy which has less proportion in being successful. In addition, West and East Germany have the same rank. To sum up, the results for the 2 mention sports are various as China is the first winner in Badminton and so is the USA in Rowing

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 in Badminton in several selected countries. In contrast
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some
 successful areas in Rowing.

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 leader in Badminton in terms of the total reward it has achieved. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWhile
while
 the USA is the first
 at sailing.

The number of gold and generally
 total reward China has won is significantly


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higher
 than other countries, at merely
 over 5 and under 30 respectively
in comparison
 with Malaysia having stood at the lowest position with no gold medals.

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 gold leaders in paddle compare to Italy which has less proportion in being successful. In addition
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winner in Badminton and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 is the USA in Rowing