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The pie charts below show the different reasons for flight delays in a particular Asian country in 2015 and 2016.

The pie charts below show the different reasons for flight delays in a particular Asian country in 2015 and 2016. YyY9r

Information regarding various causes of flight delays in a particular Asian country in 2015 and 2016 is exhibited in the charts below. Overall, it is evident that airline operations management is the majority cause of flight delays between 2015 and 2016. In analysis, airport security was the least common reason in the year 2015 followed my military factors. However, the percentage of both factors inflated and decreased by 9% and 4% in the year 2016. Bad weather held a constant percentage of approximately 20% in both years. Along with airline operations management which held 40% between the years. Whereas air traffic control plunged by 13% from 2015 until the year 2016, which caused it to be the least common reason in 2016. In conclusion, majority of the various causes increased and reduced by percentage in between the years.

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