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The chart given below give some information about the urban population growth in certain part of the cities and terms in 1950 2002 2013

The chart given below give some information about the urban population growth in certain part of the cities and terms in 1950 2002 2013 XDQKA
The bar graph presented compare and contrast the growth of urban population and population expected to grow in certain part of the world that is Africa, Asia, Caribbean and the whole world from 1950 to 2030. The unit is calibrated in percentage. In general, it is visible that the population of Caribbean was highest in 1950 and 2000 whereas, the least was in Africa and Asia. Overall, it is predicted to grow by 2030 in all the cities. To embark, as witnessed from the observation in 1950 the highest population was in the Caribbean which was about 42 % followed by the whole world which was 30%. However, the population growth in Africa and Asia was almost similar to 12% in 1950 and about 38% in 2000. Apart from this, in 2008 the Caribbean had the 70% population growth and 48% in the whole world. Moving further to the population growth forecast in 2030, it is anticipated that population in Africa will reach to almost 52% and 80% in Caribbean. However, the population growth in the whole world will be 60% with the gap of 2% in Asia (58%).
The bar graph presented compare and contrast the
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from 1950 to 2030. The unit
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of Caribbean
was highest in 1950 and 2000 whereas, the least was in Africa and Asia.
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to grow by 2030 in all the cities.

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was in the Caribbean which was about 42 % followed by the
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whole
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world
which was 30%.
However
, the
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population
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growth
in Africa and Asia was almost similar to 12% in 1950 and about 38% in 2000. Apart from this, in 2008 the Caribbean had the 70%
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population
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and 48% in the
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whole
world.

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forecast in 2030, it
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in Africa will reach to almost 52% and 80%
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in the
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will be 60% with the gap of 2% in Asia (58%).
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IELTS academic The chart given below give some information about the urban population growth in certain part of the cities and terms in 1950 2002 2013

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