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Dear Sir, I am writing a letter regarding stunning new sports center located at outskirts of town. It was surprising for me because of maintaining quality of equipment's. Initially, I was impressed due to sports center atmosphere looks congenial and decent. The quality of equipment's was better and distinct, however all of equipment's was in systematic order. This is very great initiative for first 100 people whoever visit there and secured membership for whole month. the other good thing observed there was a pool where had a lots of joy and fun for whole day along with fresh juice and healthy snacks as well. I personally recommend, went there and get a membership, do exercise in modern class and well equipped gym. I am honored to contribute this idea at your magazine. Your faithfullyJohn.

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because
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get
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