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The 2 line graphs provide information about the percentage of households with 3 different consumer goods(Washing machine, refrigerator, and vacuum cleaner) and quantities of housework per week, per household from 1920 to 2019. Overall, all electrical appliances increased although rising was more significant for vacuum cleaner and refrigerator. The number of hours per week for washing clothes, preparing meals, and cleaning experienced a downward trend. Refrigerators showed the most remarkable rise, beginning at just over 0%in 1920, surging up to 100% in 1980, and then remaining steady until 2010. Vacuum cleaners started higher at 30% these rosed, slightly slower than refrigerators, to 100% by 2000. In contrast, the percentages of washing machines began at 40%, climbed to 70% by 1960, then fell slowly and recovered to finish the period over 60% in 2019. On the second chart, time spent on washing clothes, preparing meals, and cleaning fell down significantly from 50 hours to 20 in 40 years time period. After that, in the years between 1960 and 2019, the decline was gradual, reaching slightly above 10 hours.
The 2 line graphs provide information about the percentage of households with 3
different
consumer
goods
(Washing machine,
refrigerator
, and vacuum cleaner) and quantities of housework per week, per household from 1920 to 2019.
Overall
, all electrical appliances increased although rising was more significant for vacuum cleaner and
refrigerator
. The number of hours per week for washing clothes, preparing meals, and cleaning experienced a downward trend.
Refrigerators
showed
the most remarkable rise, beginning at
just
over 0%in 1920, surging up to 100% in 1980, and then remaining steady until 2010. Vacuum cleaners
started
higher at 30% these
rosed
,
slightly
slower than
refrigerators
, to 100% by 2000.
In contrast
, the percentages of washing machines began at 40%, climbed to 70% by 1960, then fell
slowly
and recovered to finish the period over 60% in 2019. On the second chart, time spent on washing clothes, preparing meals, and cleaning fell down
significantly
from 50 hours to 20 in 40 years time period. After that, in the years between 1960 and 2019, the decline was gradual, reaching
slightly
above 10 hours.
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177 words
6.0
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