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The bar chart illustrate the amount of male and female participant took part in diverse late class at an adult educat

The bar chart illustrate the amount of male and female participant took part in diverse late class at an adult educat Pkb2X

The bar chart illustrate the amount of male and female participant took part in diverse late class at an adult educational institution in 2009 meanwhile the pie chart reveals the length of life of its members. In general, in the first figure, female members were almost higher than males, the gap between them fluctuated unstably among course. In the following chart, the participants aged 50 or over accounted for the biggest proportion, and the lowest ones was the participants were under 20. Regarding the bar chart, women relatively higher than men in three of four fields namely drama, painting and language. The distinction was particularly different, the women included 40 participant having accounted for two times as men. Wheares men were better than women at sculpture, the gap was not exceedingly contrasting. Concerning the pie chart, the aged members, who accouted for 42%, were the first postition. It was followed by partaker aged from 40 to 49, it was half of the first one. Finally, the younger they were, the smaller piece they took, the lowest one obviously dominated less than one in ten.

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chart
 illustrate the amount of male and female You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcolleaguememberplayershareholderpartnerparty
participant
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took part
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class
 at an adult educational institution in 2009 meanwhile the pie You use this word too often, consider replacing it withblueprintgraphsketchtable
chart
 reveals the length of life of its members.

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 figure, female members were almost higher than males, the gap between them fluctuated unstably
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chart
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcolleaguememberplayershareholderpartnerparty
participants
 aged 50 or over accounted for the biggest proportion, and the lowest ones was the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcolleaguememberplayershareholderpartnerparty
participants
 were under 20.

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, women relatively
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men
 in three of four fields namely
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different
, the women included 40 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcolleaguememberplayershareholderpartnerparty
participant
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men
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men
 were better than women at sculpture, the gap was not exceedingly
 contrasting.

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chart
, the aged members, who Possible spelling mistake found.accountedaccostedaccouter
accouted
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postition
. It was followed
 by partaker aged from 40 to 49, it was half of the first
 one. Finally
, the younger they were, the smaller piece they took, the lowest one obviously
 dominated less than one in ten. 