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The bar chart illustrate the amount of male and female participant took part in diverse late class at an adult educat

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The bar chart illustrate the amount of male and female participant took part in diverse late class at an adult educational institution in 2009 meanwhile the pie chart reveals the length of life of its members. In general, in the first figure, female members were almost higher than males, the gap between them fluctuated unstably among course. In the following chart, the participants aged 50 or over accounted for the biggest proportion, and the lowest ones was the participants were under 20. Regarding the bar chart, women relatively higher than men in three of four fields namely drama, painting and language. The distinction was particularly different, the women included 40 participant having accounted for two times as men. Wheares men were better than women at sculpture, the gap was not exceedingly contrasting. Concerning the pie chart, the aged members, who accouted for 42%, were the first postition. It was followed by partaker aged from 40 to 49, it was half of the first one. Finally, the younger they were, the smaller piece they took, the lowest one obviously dominated less than one in ten.
The bar
chart
illustrate the amount of male and female
participant
took part
in diverse late
class
at an adult educational institution in 2009 meanwhile the pie
chart
reveals the length of life of its members.

In general
, in the
first
figure, female members were almost higher than males, the gap between them fluctuated
unstably
among course. In the following
chart
, the
participants
aged 50 or over accounted for the biggest proportion, and the lowest ones was the
participants
were under 20.

Regarding the bar
chart
, women
relatively
higher than
men
in three of four fields
namely
drama, painting and language. The distinction was
particularly
different
, the women included 40
participant
having accounted for two times as
men
.
Wheares
men
were better than women at sculpture, the gap was not
exceedingly
contrasting.

Concerning the pie
chart
, the aged members, who
accouted
for 42%, were the
first
postition
. It
was followed
by partaker aged from 40 to 49, it was half of the
first
one.
Finally
, the younger they were, the smaller piece they took, the lowest one
obviously
dominated less than one in ten.
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IELTS academic The bar chart illustrate the amount of male and female participant took part in diverse late class at an adult educat

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