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The diagram below describe the structure of a home smokery and how it works.Summarise the below Information.

The diagram below describe the structure of a home smokery and how it works. Summarise the below Information. dpEOK

The given process chart delineates the information about home smokery and it's working techniques. overall, it is clearly observed that smokery process contains three steps. After analysing the chart, it it can be seen that there are multifurious steps of making home smokery. First step is that air is passed in the in the furnace. Then we add some wooden logs in the furnace that is is cut by chunk of masses. After that, the furnace is covered by lid. Then, wooden logs are burnt by fire. Furthermore, below the furnance there is a pipe that is attached by bricks. In the upcoming step bricks is attached a big box that is attached from one side to the ground level and another side to the fernance. In the last but not least fish is hanged by the box. Lastly the meat is ready d for eating purpose.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 process chart delineates the information about home Possible spelling mistake found.smokersSmokeysmokersmokeysmoker y
smokery
 and it's working techniques.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterOverall
overall
, it is clearly
 observed that Possible spelling mistake found.smokersSmokeysmokersmokeysmoker y
smokery
 process contains three steps.

After Possible spelling mistake. 'analysing' is British English.analyzing
analysing
 the chart, It seems you either mean "it is", "if it", "it" or there is a comma missing: "it, it".it isif ititit, it
it it
 can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that there are Possible spelling mistake found.multifariousmulti furious
multifurious
 steps of making home Possible spelling mistake found.smokersSmokeysmokersmokeysmoker y
smokery
. First
 step is that air is passed
This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only "in the".in the
in the in the
 furnace. Then we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrue
add
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 wooden logs in the furnace that Possible typo: you repeated a wordis
is is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 by chunk of masses. After that, the furnace is covered
 by lid. Then, wooden logs are burnt
 by fire.

Furthermore
, below the Possible spelling mistake found.furnace
furnance
 there is a pipe that is attached
 by bricks. In the upcoming step bricks is attached
 a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 box that is attached
 from one side to the ground level and another side to the Possible spelling mistake found.FrancefinanceFernandofurnacepenanceFernandez
fernance
. In the last This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 not A determiner is probably missing here: "the least".the least
least
 fish is hanged
 by the box. Lastly
 the meat is ready d for eating purpose. 