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Changes to a bookstore since 2000

Changes to a bookstore since 2000 Wglbe

The two diagrams describe changes which have happened to a particular bookstore since 2000 up to the present. Overall, the structure of the store has been transformed significantly, becoming a lot more convenient for its users. It is also noticeable that, more developments were made on the left side of the building. There was a large section called fiction on the left side in 2000. However, this department has been separated into four sections displaying books on art, hobbies, cookery and fiction. The other fiction in the rear left corner is now employed to sell non-fiction books while former non-fiction sector has been replaced by a cafe which is located on the right side. However, the area for travel books, new books and service desk hasn't been changed over the years.

The two diagrams This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :characterizeportray
describe
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 which have happened to a particular bookstore since 2000 up to the present.

Overall
, the structure of the store has been transformed
significantly
, becoming a lot more convenient for its users. It is also
 noticeable that, more developments were made
 on the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 side of the building.

There was a large section called fiction on the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 side in 2000.

However
, this department has been separated
 into four sections displaying You use this word too often, consider replacing it withessayalbumnovelpublicationdictionarypamphlet
books
 on art, hobbies, cookery and fiction.

The other fiction in the rear This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 corner is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 employed to sell non-fiction You use this word too often, consider replacing it withessayalbumnovelpublicationdictionarypamphlet
books
 while former non-fiction sector has been replaced
 by a 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
 which is located
 on the right side.

However
, the area for travel You use this word too often, consider replacing it withessayalbumnovelpublicationdictionarypamphlet
books
, new You use this word too often, consider replacing it withessayalbumnovelpublicationdictionarypamphlet
books
 and service desk hasn't been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 over the years. 