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The graph shows the increases in traffic in England from 1960 to 2000.

The graph shows the increases in traffic in England from 1960 to 2000. 8GBWP
The provided live chart depicts the information about the England traffic grow between 1960 and 2000. The data has been calibrated in percentage. Overall, It is clearly seen that the highest traffic car whereas least with other transformation. It is evident from the data that, in 1950 train and bicycle was same ratio grow 10 percentage in 1970 which went to 20 percentage in 2000. Moreover, other public transport started 0% in 1950 next two years gravely at 5 percentage and noticed the data in 2000 it was 18 percentage. Furthermore, Car started in 1950 next year it was 20 % increased then in 1980 car climb 100 percentage which noticed 110 % next year as well as in 2000 car ratio 140 percentage.
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chart depicts the information about the England traffic grow between 1960 and 2000. The data has
been calibrated
in percentage.

Overall
, It is
clearly
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seen
that the highest traffic
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car
whereas least with other transformation.

It is evident from the data that, in 1950 train and bicycle was same ratio grow 10
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percentage
in 1970 which went to 20
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percentage
in 2000.
Moreover
, other public transport
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started
0% in 1950
next
two years
gravely
at 5
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percentage
and noticed the data in 2000 it was 18 percentage.

Furthermore
,
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Car
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started
in 1950
next
year it was 20 % increased then in 1980
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car
climb 100
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percentage
which noticed 110 %
next
year
as well
as in 2000
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car
ratio 140
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percentage
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IELTS academic The graph shows the increases in traffic in England from 1960 to 2000.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
124 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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