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whole stage of a sewage treatment system

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The figure illustrates the way in which municipal waste turns into fertilizer and domestic water during the sewage treatment. It is clear that the whole process performs in 13 stages, which begins with the domestic refuse and ends at using local water. In the first stage, domestic dump is produced in the toilet, bath and sink by the households. After that, it passes through sewers and is collected in a septic tank. Then it sorts into two parts: the sludge and the liquid effluent. In the next stage, while the solid waste is carried to a fertilizer production unit, the dirty water is disinfected using some bacteria. These bacteria break down remaining organisms in the waste water. After that, part of the liquid effluent is released into natural water resource, while the remainder is transported into water treatment plant, where some excess water is pumped into the plant from reservoir in order to purify the water for domestic usage. At the next stage, the water which is prepared for the household purposes, is pumped into pipes and is carried to the houses to finally uses at residences.
The figure illustrates the way in which municipal waste turns into fertilizer and
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domestic
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water
during the sewage treatment. It is
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clear
that the whole process performs in 13
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stages
, which
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begins
with the
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domestic
refuse and ends at using local water.

In the
first
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stage
,
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domestic
dump
is produced
in the toilet, bath and sink by the households. After that, it passes through sewers and
is collected
in a septic tank. Then it sorts into two parts: the sludge and the liquid effluent. In the
next
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stage
, while the solid waste
is carried
to a fertilizer production unit, the dirty
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water
is disinfected
using
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some
bacteria. These bacteria break down remaining organisms in the waste water.

After that, part of the liquid effluent
is released
into natural
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water
resource, while the remainder
is transported
into
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water
treatment plant, where
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some
excess
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water
is pumped
into the plant from reservoir in order to purify the
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water
for
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domestic
usage. At the
next
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stage
, the
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water
which
is prepared
for the household purposes,
is pumped
into pipes and
is carried
to the
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houses
to
finally
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uses
at residences.
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IELTS academic whole stage of a sewage treatment system

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
187 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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