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This Bar graph respresent us a total number of employment of each 5 in 2 year 2009 and 2019. In Y-axis show us a number and in x axis show us a year. Frist, in 2009 the one that have the most employment is hotel. And the least one is travel. Diffrent from 2019 that tavel and hotel not the most one and the least one, but the most is food and the least is culture. The changes from 2009 to 2019 in sports is increase 141, in culture is drop from 82. 8 to 77. 4, in travel is rocket from 60. 9 to 114. 2, in food this one is climbed up from 283. 4 to 357. 7 and the last one hotel is increase 6. 8.

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 us a total number of employment of each Writing for an international audience? Consider adding the metric equivalent.5 in 2 (ca. 32 cm²)5 in 2 (32.26 cm²)5 in 2 (ca. 32 square centimeters)5 in 2 (32.26 square centimeters)5 in 2 (ca. 3,226 mm²)5 in 2 (3,225.8 mm²)
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 us a number and in This word is normally spelled with hyphen.x-axis
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, in 2009 the one that have the most employment is hotel. And the least one is travel. Possible spelling mistake found.DifferentDiff rent
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 and hotel not the most one and the least one, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
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 the most is food and the least is culture.

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 from 2009 to 2019 in sports is increase 141, in culture is drop from 82. 8 to 77. 4, in travel is rocket from 60. 9 to 114. 2, in food this one is climbed
 up from 283. 4 to 357. 7 and the last one hotel is increase 6. 8. 

IELTS academic total number of employment

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