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The maps show the college layout in past and present.

The maps show the college layout in past and present. JK9RE

The changes made in college infrastructure have been depicted by the maps. Overall, it can be clearly seen that tha huge changes have been made in the centre of the college. Interestingly, the most significant change is the removal of the footpath. To begin with, the car park area in the left side of the college has been expanded by removing the footpath which used to connect the college with main road and bus Stop. However, one garden on the top has been removed whereas the bus stop and the road remained intact kept intact. Furthermore, the lunch area in the middle of the college has been made shorter by introducing one shop. Moreover, washroom used to be on bottom, which has been repositioned to its opposite direction. Finally, the right portion of the college has been converted into classroom by placing the reception in the centre and the library area just below the classroom.

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changes
 made in college infrastructure have been depicted
 by the maps.

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, it can be clearly
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seen
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tha
 huge This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 have been made
 in the Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 of the college. Interestingly
, the most significant This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 is the removal of the footpath.

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begin
 with, the car park area in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 side of the college has been expanded
 by removing the footpath which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to connect the college with main road and bus This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
Stop
. However
, one garden on the top has been removed
 whereas the bus This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stop
 and the road remained intact This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 intact. Furthermore
, the lunch area in the middle of the college has been made
 shorter by introducing one shop. Moreover
, washroom This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to be on bottom, which has been repositioned
 to its opposite direction. Finally
, the right portion of the college has been converted
 into classroom by placing the reception in the Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 and the library area This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 below the classroom. 