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the chart below show the result of people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five different cities

the chart below show the result of people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five different cities N8E62

This bar chart indicates the tendency of buying and drinking habits in coffee and tea in each city of Australia. Overall, it can be seen that the city residents tended to go to a café for coffee or tea in last four weeks makeup the majority of three different kind of habits, exept in Adelaide, in which that figure was not as vote much as bought instant coffee in last four weeks. When it comes to the most rated activity, the number of city residents went to a café for coffee or tea in last four weeks came top of the list and Melbourne had the most costumers, with an average of nearly 65% residents, followed by Hobart at approximately 63%. Buying instant coffee is the next most rated choice in the last four week in four cities, except Adelaid, where buying instant coffee came first in the bucket list with 50% of city resident choice. In term of choices in all five cities, the survey carried out the least rated choice in last four weeks was buy fresh coffee, which residents chosing this in Brisbane and Adelaide joint third with roughly 34%. In Sydney, city residents bought much more fresh coffee than in those other cities, roughly 44%.

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