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The given table illustrates the cost of water in 5 cities in Australia.

The given table illustrates the cost of water in 5 cities in Australia. ELXoQ
The given table illustrates the cost of water in 5 cities in Australia. Broadly the water charges in kiloliters were divided into two categories, usage charges up to 125 kiloliters and usage charges over 125 kiloliters, on this basis, the average bill per household was calculated. It can be easily observed that the average bill per household in Perth was the highest at $332 and the average bill per household in Melbourne was the lowest at $253. The average household bill of Adelaide, Brisbane and Sydney was significantly less than Perth’s average bill but higher than Melbourne. The cost of water up to 125 KL in Perth and Adelaide was $0. 42. The charges of water up to 125 KL in Brisbane, Melbourne and Sydney are relatively higher. If water consumption goes beyond 125 KL, Sydney and Melbourne are not affected as the charges remain the same for water consumption in these two countries. Whereas when Brisbane increased its water consumption over 125 KL, it was only affected by the $3 difference amount. Adelaide and Perth were charged extra because their water consumption increased beyond 125 KL.
The
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table illustrates the cost of
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water
in 5 cities in Australia.
Broadly
the
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water
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charges


in kiloliters
were divided
into two categories, usage charges up to 125 kiloliters and usage

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charges
over 125 kiloliters, on this basis, the
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average
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bill
per household
was calculated
.

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easily
observed that the
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average
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bill
per household in Perth was the highest at $332

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and
the
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average
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bill
per household in Melbourne was the lowest at $253. The
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average


household
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bill
of Adelaide, Brisbane and Sydney was
significantly
less than Perth’s
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average
bill

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but
higher than Melbourne.

The cost of
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water
up to 125 KL in Perth and Adelaide was $0. 42. The charges of
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water
up
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to


125 KL in Brisbane, Melbourne and Sydney are
relatively
higher. If
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water
consumption
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goes


beyond 125 KL, Sydney and Melbourne are not
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affected
as the charges remain the same for

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water
consumption in these two countries. Whereas when Brisbane increased its
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water


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consumption
over 125 KL, it was
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only
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affected
by the $3 difference amount. Adelaide
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and


Perth
were charged
extra
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because
their
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water
consumption increased beyond 125 KL.
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IELTS academic The given table illustrates the cost of water in 5 cities in Australia.

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  American English
13 paragraphs
187 words
5.5
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