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Which inventions do you think very important for you?

Which inventions do you think very important for you? jDnKN

There are many things in life that extremely important for me, and I will tell you a number of things that very important. And I will point out some reasons why I choose them in this essay. First of all, smartphone can be considered an indispensable item in my daily life. It helps me in studying a lot, for example, I can find all the information about the lesson on the Internet very easily. In addition, it helps me in contacting friends and parents easier. The phone is very compact, therefore I can take it everywhere Second, a television has also helped me a lot in entertainment. And it is a device that helps me relieve stress after hours of hard study. And television also have educational programs and I can gain a lot of knowledge. In my opinion, smartphone and television have a lot of advantages for me. They support my studies and my life.

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