Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Students of three languages, 2020-2030 (English, Spanish and Mandarin)

Students of three languages, 2020-2030 (English, Spanish and Mandarin) 707Jy
The line graph displays alterations for students of English, Spanish, and Mandarin between 2020 and 2030. Overall, students who speak English have been the domain type and will continue this trend in the future. Spanish and Mandarin have represented a small in 2020, but then there has been an increase through each year. Students who speak English commands the biggest share with 550 million in 2020, rising to 150 million in 2024. There is a modest decline of about 80 million from 2024 to 2060, however, after 2026, it is recovered and continued to rise approximately 70 million in 2030. Spanish and Mandarin have similar shapes; both have a lower number of students. Mandarin has the lowest estimated students about 100 million in 2020 on top of that the number of students gets increasingly until it reaches a peak of under 500 million students in 2030. Similarly to the Spanish’s lowest students but with a milder estimation of just over 200 million and getting higher until 2030.
The line graph displays alterations for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
of English, Spanish, and Mandarin between 2020 and 2030.

Overall
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
who speak English have been the domain type and will continue this trend in the future. Spanish and Mandarin have represented a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
in 2020,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
then there has been an increase through each year.

Students who speak English commands the biggest share with 550
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
million
in 2020, rising to 150
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
million
in 2024. There is a modest decline of about 80
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
million
from 2024 to 2060,
however
, after 2026, it
is recovered
and continued to rise approximately 70
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
million
in 2030.

Spanish and Mandarin have similar shapes; both have a lower number of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
. Mandarin has the lowest estimated
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
about 100
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
million
in 2020
on top of that
the number of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
gets
increasingly
until it reaches a peak of under 500
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
million
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
in 2030.
Similarly
to the Spanish’s lowest
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
with a milder estimation of
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
over 200
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
million
and getting higher until 2030.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic Students of three languages, 2020-2030 (English, Spanish and Mandarin)

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
167 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts
  • 5band
    The diagram shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.
    The diagram shows the recycling of the plastics things which people can use for the liquids. Overall, the production of the using bottles there is nine stages, which recycling of the product started to gathering from pollutions. Firstly, the people throw away the plastic flasks to the garbage, afte...
  • 6band
    The graph below shows the foreign visitors who visited the UK for different purposes
    The graph illustrates the number of foreign visitors, who visited the United Kingdom for business, holiday and for meeting friends and relatives during the period from 1989 to 2009. The data has been calibrated in millions. Overall, it can clearly be seen that the number of visitors for holiday pur...
  • 6.5band
    The chart below represents the information about three countries
    The chart below presents the information of three countries about people moving from rural to urban areas and gives a prediction for the future 4 years. To begin with, in 2000 the sum of people moving to urban areas in Iran was mostly 10 million. However, between 2005 and 2010 the number of moving ...
  • 6band
    the graph show electricity production in France
    The line graph compares the amount of electricity produced in France over a period of 32 years. Overall, there was an increase in the amount of electricity generated by nuclear and renewables in France, while the opposite trend can be seen in the figures for Hydro and Thermal power. It is clear tha...
  • 6band
    The provided chart gives the depict data about the proportion of cars produced in Argentina, Australia, and Thailand in 6 years
    The provided chart gives the depict data about the proportion of cars produced in Argentina, Australia, and Thailand in 6 years commencing with 2003. As is observed, what stands out from the chart is that Thailand hold the greatest number of cas produced. The noticable point is that, the production...
  • 5.5band
    abdulmelik arslan ielts bar chart practice
    The line graph provides information about food consumption in Australia from 1950 to 2010. Overall, the graph gives 5 different food, which are vegetables, fruit, meat, bread and seafood. All food but the meat was showed an upward trend throughout the given period. In 1950, vegetables had the high...