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abdulmelik arslan ielts writing task 1 practice

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The bar chart provides infomation about the distribution of income groups in cities and regional centers of Australia. Overall, the percentage of middle income groups make up the highest rate in the cities population. Whereas the lower middle group is the highest rate of income in the regional centres. In the cities, middle group's rate is 35%, which is the highest percentage of yearly income among cities people. Every one-third of people have average $40. 000-$70. 000 yearly income and these are constuting the lower group. The rate of high income group creating 20% among cities people, while the percentage of low income population the lowest average yearly income group, which rate is just above 10%. The highest percentage of average yearly income is lower middle group in the regional centres with about 34%. In contrast, the rate of high income group is the lowest rate of average yearly income, which rate is 15%. The middle and the low income group are sorting after lower middle group in the regional centres. The middle and the low populations' rate are approximantely 27% and 22%, respectively.
The bar chart provides
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infomation
about the distribution of
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income
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groups
in
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cities
and
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regional
centers of Australia.

Overall
, the
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percentage
of
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middle
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income
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groups
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make
up the highest
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rate
in the
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cities
population. Whereas the lower
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middle
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group
is the highest
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rate
of
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income
in the
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regional
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centres
.

In the
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cities
,
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middle
group's
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rate
is 35%, which is the highest
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percentage
of
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yearly
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income
among
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cities
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people
. Every one-third of
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people
have
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average
$40. 000-$70. 000
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yearly
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income
and these are
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constuting
the lower
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group
. The
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rate
of high
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income
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group
creating 20% among
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cities
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people
, while the
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percentage
of low
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income
population the lowest
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average
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yearly
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income
group,

which
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rate
is
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just
above 10%.

The highest
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percentage
of
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average
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yearly
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income
is lower
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middle
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group
in the
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regional
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centres
with about 34%.
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, the
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rate
of high
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income
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group
is the lowest
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rate
of
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average
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yearly
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income
, which
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rate
is 15%. The
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middle
and the low
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income
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group
are sorting after lower
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middle
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group
in the
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regional
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centres
. The
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middle
and the low populations'
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rate
are
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approximantely
27% and 22%,
respectively
.
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IELTS academic abdulmelik arslan ielts writing task 1 practice

Academic
  American English
5 paragraphs
184 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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