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The graph shows the number of overseas visitors who visited the UK for different purposes from 1989 to 2009.

The graph shows the number of overseas visitors who visited the UK for different purposes from 1989 to 2009. ewLJW
The rendered line graph illustrates how many intercontinental people went to the United Kingdom for distinct purposes during the period ranging from 1989 to 2009. In brief, although not many foreigner visitors registered in England for three given motives initially, a conspicuous growth can be clearly seen in their numbers by the end. 5 million overseas people for business had been to the UK in the beginning and their numbers inclined to 8 millions by the end. A moderate declination, however, took it on 7 million after some time. The same trend, similarly, followed by the ones, who went to the Great Britain to meet their friends and relatives, since with a continuous inclination throughout the given years more than four million people visited there in 2009 in comparison of 1989 (around 3 million). Even though holydaymakers' interest, who chose the UK as their a tourist destination, kept fluctuate wildly, they were on the peak in the beginning and end too (above 6 million and 9 million respectively) as compared to other mentioned visitors to England.
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for business had been to the UK in the beginning and their numbers inclined to 8
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