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wheats exported 1985-1990

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The line graph compares the amount of wheat being exported in three different places around the globe over 5 years period. Overall, Canada was the country which exported wheat considerably higher than other countries. In addition, although an upward trend can be seen in European Community, Australia experienced the opposite. In 1985, approximately 20 million tons of wheat were exported, and after a marginal decline, the figures went up dramatically to its peak of 25 million tons in 1988 before being plummeted to just under 15 million tons of wheat in 1989 and finished the period at the same amount where it started. In contrast, European Community exported 17 million tons of wheat which showed 3 million tons of decrease after the first year. However, the figures again rose up gradually till 1988, after which, they showed a sharp increase up to over 20 million tons of wheat in the final year. In regard to Australia, 15 million tons of wheat were exported and the figures completed the period at just over 10 million tons wheat, a decline of 5 million tons.
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in three
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different
places around the globe over 5 years period.

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, Canada was the country which
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considerably
higher than other countries.
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, although an upward trend can be
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seen
in European Community, Australia experienced the opposite.

In 1985, approximately 20
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tons of
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wheat
were
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, and after a marginal decline, the figures went up
dramatically
to its peak of 25
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million
tons in 1988
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before
being plummeted
to
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just
under 15
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in 1989 and finished the period at the same amount where it
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contrast, European Community
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17
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which
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showed
3
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million
tons of decrease after the
first
year.
However
, the figures again rose up
gradually
till 1988, after which, they
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showed
a sharp increase up to over 20
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in the final year. In regard to Australia, 15
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were
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and the figures completed the period at
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over 10
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, a decline of 5
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IELTS academic wheats exported 1985-1990

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4 paragraphs
182 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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