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The chart demonstrated the export income in 2015 and 2016 categorized into five product types: petroleum products, engineered goods, gems and jewelry, agricultural products and textiles.

The chart demonstrated the export income in 2015 and 2016 categorized into five product types: petroleum products, engineered goods, gems and jewelry, agricultural products and textiles. kxKLW
The chart demonstrated the export income in 2015 and 2016 categorized into five product types: petroleum products, engineered goods, gems and jewelry, agricultural products and textiles. Among the five categories, petroleum products maintained the highest earning in both years with 60 billion dollars in 2015 and increased slightly to 63 billion dollars in 2016. Similarly, engineered goods, reported the second highest, followed the same rising trend. The country received 60 billion dollars in 2016 from these goods claiming a 8. 5% rise from the previous year. Meanwhile, textiles which remained the lowest earning in both years made the biggest jump, 15. 24%, from around 25 billion dollars in 2015 to roughly 31 billion dollars in the following year. In addition, the earning from jewelry exportation dropped slightly from around 42 billion dollars to 40 billion dollars as the income from agricultural products remained almost stagnant with only a 0. 81% increase in 2016.
The chart demonstrated the export income in 2015 and 2016 categorized into five
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types: petroleum
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, engineered
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, gems and jewelry, agricultural
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and textiles. Among the five categories, petroleum
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maintained the highest earning in both years with 60
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in 2015 and increased
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in 2016.
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, reported the second highest, followed the same rising trend. The country received 60
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in 2016 from these
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8. 5% rise from the previous
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. Meanwhile, textiles which remained the lowest earning in both years made the biggest jump, 15. 24%, from around 25
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in 2015 to roughly 31
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in the following
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to 40
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as the income from agricultural
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remained almost stagnant with
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a 0. 81% increase in 2016.
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IELTS academic The chart demonstrated the export income in 2015 and 2016 categorized into five product types: petroleum products, engineered goods, gems and jewelry, agricultural products and textiles.

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