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The two maps below show modification to a happy valley shopping center in 2007 and in 2010.

The two maps below show modification to a happy valley shopping center in 2007 and in 2010. 5BMBQ

The maps illustrate some changes that were made to the happy valley shopping center between 1982 and 2010. In general, it is clear that two main modifications were made to the shopping center. These involved the building of a new parking lot and furniture retail and the moving of building of three stores. In 1982, there was a lake to the northwest of the valley. In the shopping center`s interior an entranceway opening into a lobby, next to an entertainment area in the center of a building, and toilets in the bottom right of the corner, after that there was an elevator to the second floor. On the right side furniture store, electronics store, and sports store were located directly across from the entrance while on the top-left corner of the center that was a coffee store and next to a food store were constructed. From 1982 to 2010 the happy valley shopping center underwent many changes. In 1982, there were coffee shop and lake to the northwest of the shopping center. There were no longer present in 2010 and furniture retail was built instead of the lake. In 2010, a new parking lot was constructed to the southwest of the shopping center. The building`s interior, an entertainment area on the center side, toilets, and an elevator to the bottom were remaining unchanged. There was a food store on the top side, but it was moved to the bottom by 2010, and sport and electronics stores were demolished in favor of building new themed restaurants.

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