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The diagram shows how electricity is produced from nuclear power station

The diagram shows how electricity is produced from nuclear power station d3yp6

The diagram elucidates the production of electricity in nuclear power plant. The Uranium is used as a fuel for the power station at initial stage there is a large building named containment building where the steam is produced there are two steam generators where uranium is used a fuel for them and steam pipes are connected from steam generators to the turbine on the other side. The turbine consist of many gear assembly and the shaft is connected to the generator following line merged to the transformer where electricity is stepped up or down and lines are conneceted to the coolling tower to reduce the heat produced during the nuclear reaction and cooling water source is sucked from the near lake or pond to the turbine container and transferred to the steam generator for cooling purpose and steam production then the electricity line is given to the large poles and transferred to the consumers for industrial or residential purposes.

The diagram elucidates the production of electricity in nuclear power plant.

The Uranium is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 as a fuel for the power station at initial stage there is a large Make sure that the adjective 'building' is correct. Possibly, it should be an adverb (typically ~ly) that modifies 'named'. Possibly, it should be the first word in a compound adjective (hyphenated adjective). Possibly, it is correct.
building named
 containment building where the steam is produced
 there are two steam generators where uranium is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 a fuel for them and steam pipes are connected
 from steam generators to the turbine on the other side.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 turbine consist of This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 gear assembly and the shaft is connected
 to the generator following line merged to the transformer where electricity is stepped
 up or down and lines are Possible spelling mistake found.connected
conneceted
 to the Possible spelling mistake found.coolingcool ling
coolling
 tower to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
 the heat produced during the nuclear reaction and cooling water source is sucked
 from the near lake or pond to the turbine container and transferred to the steam generator for cooling purpose and steam production then the electricity line is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 to the large poles and transferred to the consumers for industrial or residential purposes. 