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Wheat exports in three countries in 1985-1990

Wheat exports in three countries in 1985-1990 GNN6Q
The given line graph highlights facts connected with how much wheat was exported in three different areas of the world called Australia, Canada and the European Community. The dates are calculated for a half-decade beginning in 1985 and ending in 1990. Overall, it can be observed that export figures for Canada and European Community experienced an upward trend with some fluctuations, during the period presented, only differing in the rates of change. However, Australia's figure fell steadily, which showed the opposite pattern. At the beginning of the period, wheat export from Canada stood almost 20 million tonnes after which it experienced a steady decline of 3 million during the next year. This rate climbed significantly reaching the peak of 25 million tonnes in 1988 and then dropped sharply hitting the low of under 15 million tonnes in the following year. As it is clear from the graph in the year 1985 there was not a major difference in the exports among Australia and European Community, with export figure stood at 15 million tonnes and 17 million tonnes respectively. By contrast, in the final year, wheat exports of Australia to a low of about 11 million tons whilst exports from the European Community rose steeply reaching a high of over 21 million tons.
The
given
line graph highlights facts connected with how much wheat
was exported
in three
different
areas of the world called Australia, Canada and the European
Community
. The dates
are calculated
for a half-decade beginning in 1985 and ending in 1990.
Overall
, it can
be observed
that
export
figures for Canada and European
Community
experienced an upward trend with
some
fluctuations, during the period presented,
only
differing in the rates of
change
.
However
, Australia's figure fell
steadily
, which
showed
the opposite pattern.

At the beginning of the period, wheat
export
from Canada stood almost 20
million
tonnes after which it experienced a steady decline of 3
million
during the
next
year. This rate climbed
significantly
reaching the peak of 25
million
tonnes in 1988 and then dropped
sharply
hitting the low of under 15
million
tonnes in the following year.

As it is
clear
from the graph in the year 1985 there was not a major difference in the
exports
among Australia and European
Community
, with
export
figure stood at 15
million
tonnes and 17
million
tonnes
respectively
. By contrast, in the final year, wheat
exports
of Australia to a low of about 11
million
tons whilst
exports
from the European
Community
rose
steeply
reaching a high of over 21
million
tons.
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IELTS academic Wheat exports in three countries in 1985-1990

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