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proportion of carbohydrates, fat and protein in 3 different diets

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The pie charts give information about the percentage of contents in three different diets such as an average diet, a healthy diet and a healthy diet for sport. The way the contents (carbohydrates, protein and fat) are divided up is not much different in these diets. In average diet, carbohydrates and protein take up the same proportion, accounting for 40% each while fat constitutes only 20%. Furthermore, carbohydrates make up by far the largest percentage in healthy diet for sport with 60%. This is 10% higher than the proportion of carbohydrates in a normal healthy diet and 20% higher than that of average diet. However, sportspeople require relatively lower amount of protein (25%) and fat (15%) than those who eat an average diet and a healthy diet. Regarding fat, it takes up the least proportion amounting to nearly one fifth of all 3 diets. In conclusion, it is clear that the percentages of carbohydrates are highest in all 3 diets while the proportions of fat are lowest.
The pie charts give information about the percentage of contents in three
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different
diets such as an
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average
diet, a
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healthy
diet and a
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healthy
diet for sport. The way the contents
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(carbohydrates
, protein and
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fat)
are divided
up is not much
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different
in these diets.

In
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average
diet,
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carbohydrates
and protein take up the same
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proportion
, accounting for 40% each while
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fat
constitutes
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only
20%.
Furthermore
,
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carbohydrates
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make
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healthy
diet for sport with 60%. This is 10% higher than the
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proportion
of
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carbohydrates
in a normal
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healthy
diet and 20% higher than that of
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average
diet.
However
, sportspeople require
relatively
lower amount of protein (25%) and
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fat
(15%) than those who eat an
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average
diet and a
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healthy
diet. Regarding
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fat
, it takes up the least
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proportion
amounting to
nearly
one fifth of all 3 diets.

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that the percentages of
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carbohydrates
are highest in all 3 diets while the proportions of
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fat
are lowest.
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IELTS academic proportion of carbohydrates, fat and protein in 3 different diets

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