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One pie chart illustrates the amounts of enery consumed by an average Austrian household.

One pie chart illustrates the amounts of enery consumed by an average Austrian household. k66A8
One pie chart illustrates the amounts of enery consumed by an average Austrian household. Whereas, another pie chart represents resease of greenhouse gas, that is cause of energy use. Overall. around three fourth of energy was utilized by only two household uses, that were heating and water heating. While, water heating and other appliances were two prime household uses to transmit greenhouse gas. Heating caused less greenhouse emission, inspite being used more by Australian. Uses of that was 42%, but it caused only 15% of greenhouse gas. In terms of water heating, the cause of gas emission and uses were both approximately same, 32% and 30% respectively. Similar can be seen for the cooling as well. In other hand, lighting and refrigeration caused twice production of gass as compared to their used. They produced 8% and 14% of gas. Whereas, uses were only 4% and 7%. In addition to this, other appliances also did the same transmission as compared to it uses. It was used only 15 percent and caused 28 percent of gas emission.
One pie chart illustrates the amounts of
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enery
consumed by an average Austrian household. Whereas, another pie chart represents
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resease
of
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greenhouse
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gas
,
that is
cause of energy
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use
.

Overall
.
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around
three fourth of energy
was utilized
by
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only
two household
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uses
, that were
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heating
and water
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heating
. While, water
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heating
and other appliances were two prime household
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uses
to transmit
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greenhouse
gas.

Heating
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caused
less
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greenhouse
emission,
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inspite
being
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used
more by Australian.
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Uses
of that was 42%,
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it
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caused
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only
15% of
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greenhouse
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gas
. In terms of water
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heating
, the cause of
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gas
emission and
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uses
were both approximately same, 32% and 30%
respectively
. Similar can be
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seen
for the cooling
as well
.

In other hand, lighting and refrigeration
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caused
twice production of
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gass
as compared to their
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used
. They produced 8% and 14% of
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gas
. Whereas,
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uses
were
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only
4% and 7%.
In addition
to this, other appliances
also
did the same transmission as compared to it
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uses
. It was
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used
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only
15 percent and
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caused
28 percent of
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gas
emission.
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IELTS academic One pie chart illustrates the amounts of enery consumed by an average Austrian household.

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175 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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