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the chart shows Southland's main exports in 2000 and future provisions in the year 2025

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The chart provides information of the main important exportation in Southland during the period 2000 to 2021 and future provisions for the year 2025. An overall view of the graph shows a significant export in dairy products, especially in the last year, than meat ones. By studying the graph in more detail we can observe that International tourism represents the main export. Indeed the number of tourists in the year 2000 reached more than 8 billion pounds. A second important resource were certainly dairy products ( nearly 7 billion of pounds) and lastly meat. During the years studied there have been several changes. In 2021 the exportation of dairy products is about to reach 10 billion pounds. International tourism as well faces an increase by gaining nearly 9 billion pounds, whereas meat products exports have a marginal decline and earn approximately just over half billion pounds. The provision for the future tells us there will be an increase in tourism's commerce ( nearly 10 billion pounds) while dairy and meat products will see a marginal decrease.
The chart provides information of the main
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exportation in Southland during the period 2000 to 2021 and future provisions for the
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2025.

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view of the graph
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a significant export in
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dairy
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By studying the graph in more detail we can observe that International tourism represents the main export.
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the number of tourists in the
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2000 reached more than 8
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billion
pounds. A second
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products
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billion
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meat
. During the years studied there have been several
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. In 2021 the exportation of
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billion
pounds. International tourism
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9
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billion
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10
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