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The line chart illustrates the amount of wheat exported from 3 different regions, namely Australia, Canada and European Community, from 1985 to 1990. The quantities are measured in millions of tonnes. Overall, it is immediately obvious that wheat exports of Australia experienced a downward trend, whereas that figure of European Community increased dramatically. It can also be seen that wheat exports of Canada remained stable after a period of fluctuation. In general, European Community registered the highest wheat exports. The amount of wheat exported from Australia stood at around 15 million tonnes, then it saw a slight rise in the following year before experiencing a constant decline to about 11 million tonnes in 1990. By contrast, after a sharp fall in 1986, wheat exports of European Community grew steadily and reached roughly 21 million tonnes. The amount of wheat exports of Canada stood at about 19 million tonnes in 1986 and remained stable in the end of the 6-year period. It reached the peak in 1988 and fell to the bottom in 1989 with the quantities of about 25 and 14 million tonnes respectively.
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exported from 3
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different
regions,
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Australia, Canada and European
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Community
, from 1985 to 1990. The quantities
are measured
in
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millions
of tonnes.

Overall
, it is immediately obvious that
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wheat
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exports
of Australia experienced a downward trend, whereas that figure of European
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Community
increased
dramatically
. It can
also
be
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that
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wheat
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of Canada remained stable after a period of fluctuation.
In general
, European
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Community
registered the highest
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wheat
exports.

The amount of
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exported from Australia stood at around 15
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million
tonnes, then it
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saw
a slight rise in the following year
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experiencing a constant decline to about 11
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million
tonnes in 1990. By contrast, after a sharp fall in 1986,
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wheat
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exports
of European
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Community
grew
steadily
and reached roughly 21
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million
tonnes.

The amount of
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of Canada stood at about 19
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million
tonnes in 1986 and remained stable in the
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end
of the 6-year period. It reached the peak in 1988 and fell to the bottom in 1989 with the quantities of about 25 and 14
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tonnes
respectively
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IELTS academic wheat exports in 3 regions

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