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The bar chart shows the predicted number of buildings that will be powered by solar and wind energy in the future

The bar chart shows the predicted number of buildings that will be powered by solar and wind energy in the future JKJM0
The bar chart illustrates the anticipation is that the number of buldings powered by wind power and solar enegy from 2015 to 2025. Overall, forms of energy will increase in the next ten years; however, a significant growth will witnessed in the data of solar-powered. Noticeable, it is anticipated that solar energy and wind power each will provide approximately the same amount of energy in initially, but in years to come, the difference will be much larger. Being at the smallest level of about 25 millions in 2015, the figure for wind power will have slightly risen in the next five years with nearly 30 million buildings. Meanwhile, it is estimate that 35 million buildings will be using wind power in 2025. On the other hand, solar energy is forecast to be a much greater source of energy than wind power during in the decade. We also see a major energy transition by soler power, what will be four times as many energy buildings as between 2015 and 2020. It is also noticeable that the statistics of solar power is expected to climb to 500 per cent in the end of decade and it will be largest source of energy.
The bar chart illustrates the anticipation is that the number of
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buldings
powered by
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wind
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power
and
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solar
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enegy
from 2015 to 2025.

Overall
, forms of
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energy
will increase in the
next
ten years;
however
, a significant growth will
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in the data of solar-powered. Noticeable, it
is anticipated
that
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solar
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energy
and
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wind
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power
each will provide approximately the same amount of
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energy
in
initially
,
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but
in years to
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, the difference will be much larger.

Being at the smallest level of about 25 millions in 2015, the figure for
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wind
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power
will have
slightly
risen in the
next
five years with
nearly
30 million buildings. Meanwhile, it is estimate that 35 million buildings will be using
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wind
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power
in 2025.

On the other hand
,
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solar
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energy
is forecast to be a much greater source of
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energy
than
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wind
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power
during in the decade. We
also
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see
a major
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energy
transition by
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soler
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power
, what will be four times as
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many
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energy
buildings as between 2015 and 2020. It is
also
noticeable that the statistics of
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solar
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power
is
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expected
to climb to 500 per cent in the
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