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The process illustrates how waste is treated

The process illustrates how waste is treated APNge

The diagram illustrates the process of treating waste. It is clear that there are six main steps in this process, beginning with buying and using new plastic products from the shop and ending with returning of new recycled products and entering the market once again. In the first stage of the process, new items on display in shops are bought, utilized and discarded when it’s no longer needed. Whereas bags and rubbish are sent to landfill, plastic bottles are collected for recycling and then brought to the sorting house where they are separated into various categories In the following stage of the process, the plastic which is sorted, put onto trucks and delivered to facilities to be processed and turn into new plastic goods. At the final stage, these new recycled plastic products are distributed back to the stores where they are sold. Following that, they are reused, thrown away and disposed again. Thus the process repeats again.

The diagram illustrates the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
process
 of treating waste.

It is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
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process
, beginning with buying and using You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
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plastic
 products from the shop and ending with returning of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 recycled products and entering the market once again.

In the first
 stage of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
process
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 items on display in shops are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
, utilized and discarded when it’s no longer needed. Whereas bags and rubbish are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 to landfill, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withelasticmolded
plastic
 bottles are collected
 for recycling and then brought to the sorting This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 where they are separated
 into various Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphcategories.categories!categories?categories:categories,categories;
categories


In the following stage of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
process
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withelasticmolded
plastic
 which is sorted
, put onto trucks and delivered to facilities to be processed
 and turn into You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withelasticmolded
plastic
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
. At the final stage, these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 recycled You use this word too often, consider replacing it withelasticmolded
plastic
 products are distributed
 back to the stores where they are sold
. Following that, they are reused
, thrown away and disposed again. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Thus,
Thus
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
process
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repeats again
. 