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The map show the plains of library in 2001 and 2009

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The assigned maps expound the layout of library and reflect changes that had happened in 2001 and 2009. At the outset, the facility of fiction was provided in the North side which had been replaced by children's books in 2009. However, there was news paper and periodicals in 2001 and this place converted in films and DVDs. More than that librarian 's desk, enterence and stairs encounted no change in both years. Probing further, the space of tables was located in the amidst of the library it has been enlarged the size in 2009. However, the new area of computers introduced in 2009. Interestingly, there was self help and history area in the west side which had been redesigned by six areas like history, fiction, self help, kitchen, economics and law in 2009. Overall dramatic change can be noticed in given time.
The assigned maps expound the layout of library and reflect
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changes
that had happened in 2001 and 2009. At the outset, the facility of fiction
was provided
in the North side which had
been replaced
by children's books in 2009.
However
, there was
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news paper
and periodicals in 2001 and this place converted in films and DVDs. More than that librarian 's desk,
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enterence
and stairs
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encounted
no
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change
in both years. Probing
further
, the space of tables
was located
in the amidst of the library it has
been enlarged
the size in 2009.
However
, the new area of computers introduced in 2009.
Interestingly
, there was self
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
and history area in the west side which had
been redesigned
by six areas like history, fiction, self
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
, kitchen, economics and law in 2009.
Overall
dramatic
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change
can
be noticed
in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
time.
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