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The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices

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The following bar chart illustrates the changes in house prices during two spans of periods, 1990-1995 and 1996-2000 and compares with the data in 1989 in five cities: New York, Tokyo, London, Madrid and Frankfurt. At first glance, except Frankfurt, all cities experienced an upward trend in house price. In 1990 to 1995, Madrid and Tokyo had a mere increase by 2% and 3% respectively, whereas New York, Tokyo and London appeared a moderate drop with 5% to 7% compared to the price of 1989. Furthermore, with the next period, London had the most significant change among the five places, a surge of around 12% which was about two-fold of that in New York. Prices in Madrid rose sightly with 4%. Frankfurt’s house price appeared a marginal rise to 1% compared to 1989. On the contrary, Tokyo, the only city remained to show a negative figure, continued to experience its fall in house price to -5%, its prices were still below 1989 levels.
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during two spans of periods, 1990-1995 and 1996-2000 and compares with the data in 1989 in five cities: New York, Tokyo, London, Madrid and Frankfurt. At
first
glance, except Frankfurt, all cities experienced an upward trend in
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In 1990 to 1995, Madrid and Tokyo had a mere increase by 2% and 3%
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among the five places, a surge of around 12% which was about two-fold of that in New York.
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in Madrid rose
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appeared a marginal rise to 1% compared to 1989.
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