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what think make world today ?

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If you think about what is make world to global warming, the answer is Pollution. How many pollution that people make now. What pollution type? Maybe sound, light or garbage. But three pollution is important to make climate change is Air pollution, Land pollution and Water pollution. The first is Air pollution. One thing is really important to human is air but nowadays we make carbon dioxide and then destroy the earth's atmosphere. Temperature is very improve and ice in north and south is melting. Everything is happen from your lifestyle, drive car or cut down trees.
If you
think
about what is
make
world to global warming, the answer is
Pollution
. How
many
pollution
that
people
make
now
. What
pollution
type? Maybe sound, light or garbage.
But
three
pollution
is
important
to
make
climate
change
is Air
pollution
, Land
pollution
and Water pollution.

The
first
is Air
pollution
. One thing is
really
important
to human is air
but
nowadays we
make
carbon dioxide and then
destroy
the earth's atmosphere. Temperature is
very
improve
and ice in north and south is melting. Everything is
happen
from your lifestyle, drive car or
cut
down trees.
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IELTS academic what think make world today ?

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