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The bar graph compares and contrasts data on the differences in the percentages

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The bar graph compares and contrasts data on the differences in the percentages of Australians' coffee and tea purchasing and consuming habits in the last 4 weeks in five regions of the country. From an overall perspective, it is evident that going to the cafe to have coffee and tea is the most common habit of the citizens in three of the place, except for Adelaide. The figures for instant coffee in five cities are higher than the percentage of people who buy fresh coffee.
The bar graph compares and contrasts data on the differences in the percentages of Australians'
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coffee
and tea purchasing and consuming habits in the last 4 weeks in five regions of the country. From an
overall
perspective, it is evident that going to the
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
cafe
to have
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coffee
and tea is the most common habit of the citizens in three of the place,
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except for
Adelaide. The figures for instant
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coffee
in five cities are higher than the percentage of
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people
who
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buy
fresh
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
coffee
.
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IELTS academic The bar graph compares and contrasts data on the differences in the percentages

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
85 words
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