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Annual earnings of three bakeries

Annual earnings of three bakeries 70GV2

The line graph gives information about the income of three different bakeries in London, over the period 10 years, from 200 to 2010. Overall, there are upward trends in the income of both Bernie’s Buns and Robbie’s Bakery, while there is a downward trend in the earnings of Lovely Loaves. In addition, the yearly income of Lovely Loaves was the most in 2000, but was the least in 2010. In 2000, the earnings of Robbie’s Bakery was almost 55000 $ and it did not change until 2005, while the earnings of Bernie’s Buns saw significantly fluctuated in 2003, and remained steady in 2005. The earnings of Robbie’s Bakery then considerably increased and reached just over 100000$ in 2010, whereas the incoming of Bernie’s Buns continued the same with Robbie’s Bakery. The income of Lovely Loaves was about 82000$ in 2000, but then it considerably fluctuated and down at 40000$ in 2008m and leveled out until 2010.

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 bakeries in London, over the period 10 years, from 200 to 2010.

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 of both Bernie’s Buns and Robbie’s Bakery, while there is a downward trend in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalaryreturnrevenueprofitpaygain
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 of Lovely Loaves. In addition
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earnings
 of Robbie’s Bakery was almost The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "$55000".$55000
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 of Robbie’s Bakery then considerably
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 in 2010, whereas the incoming of Bernie’s Buns continued the same with Robbie’s Bakery.

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