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What is your life and schedule

What is your life and schedule ENJxR

I got up at 01. 30 PM because I fall asleep at 06. 00 AM. After I wake up, I went to see my mom because we plan to go to bank before it closed. Actually, we have planed to go to the bank since yesterday, unfortunately we miss this agenda. During I was walking to see my mom, I found that she was taking to her guests. I had been waiting for my mom around 30 mins. Then we went out from out home around 3. 00 pm. While we was heading to the bank, I just remembered that I forgot my ID card which is in my wallet. Then we turned the direction back and picked up it. We arrived the bank at 03. 15 PM. and went out around 03. 50 PM. During I was droving, she asked me about having lunch outside. Finally, I designed to go back to have it at home. After we had arrived, maids finished my lunch which is Stir-Fired-Bacon with Holy-Basil. It placed on table with ice-coffee. I had it in one go and backed to my bed room around 05. 00 PM. During I had been staying in my room, my sist nocked my door. She asked me to help her work. We spent around 4 hrs together and we went to have dinner around 9 PM. I returned to the room around 10 PM and finished my shower around 10. 30 PM. So, from now on, I am staring my IELTs to 6 AM. in the morning. In my opinion, I wasted my time in a few days. I must to revise my schedule.

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got
 up at 01. 30 PM This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I fall asleep at 06. 00 AM. After I wake up, I You use this word too often, consider replacing it withflyretiretravelmoveleavepass
went
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 my mom This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 we plan to go to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfundtreasurystorestock
bank
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 it closed.

Actually, we have planed to go to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfundtreasurystorestock
bank
 since yesterday, unfortunately we miss this agenda.

During I was walking to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 my mom, I found that she was taking to her guests.

I had been waiting for my mom You use this word too often, consider replacing it withovereverywhereabout
around
 30 Possible spelling mistake found.minutesminmindwinsminemines
mins
. Then we You use this word too often, consider replacing it withflyretiretravelmoveleavepass
went
 out from out home You use this word too often, consider replacing it withovereverywhereabout
around
 3. 00 pm. While we Use first person plural verb with 'we': "are", "were".arewere
was
 heading to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfundtreasurystorestock
bank
, I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 remembered that I forgot my ID card which is in my wallet. Then we turned the direction back and picked up it. We arrived the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfundtreasurystorestock
bank
 at 03. 15 PM. and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withflyretiretravelmoveleavepass
went
 out You use this word too often, consider replacing it withovereverywhereabout
around
 03. 50 PM. During I was Possible spelling mistake found.drivingprovingrovingdroningd roving
droving
, she asked me about having lunch outside. Finally
, I designed to go back to have it at home.

After we had arrived, maids finished my lunch which is Stir-Fired-Bacon with Holy-Basil. It placed on table with ice-coffee. I had it in one go and backed to my This word is normally spelled as one.bedroom
bed room
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withovereverywhereabout
around
 05. 00 PM. During I had been staying in my room, my Possible spelling mistake found.listsitsitsfistmistsilt
sist
Possible spelling mistake found.knockedlockeddockedmockedneckedrocked
nocked
 my door. She asked me to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 her work. We spent You use this word too often, consider replacing it withovereverywhereabout
around
 4 hrs Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).together, and
together and
 we You use this word too often, consider replacing it withflyretiretravelmoveleavepass
went
 to have dinner You use this word too often, consider replacing it withovereverywhereabout
around
 9 PM. I returned to the room You use this word too often, consider replacing it withovereverywhereabout
around
 10 PM and finished my shower You use this word too often, consider replacing it withovereverywhereabout
around
 10. 30 PM.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, from This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 on, I am staring my Possible spelling mistake found.IELTSBeltsMeltsPeltsCeltsWelts
IELTs
 to 6 AM. in the morning.

In my opinion, I wasted my time in a few days. I After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use "must" or "have to" here.musthave to
must to
 revise my schedule. 