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The bar chart gives us an idea about oversea trade of a country for various commodities during the years 2015 and 2016. It explains us the changes in price of these commodities during two years. The changes given is in percentage. The profits earned by petroleum in 2015 were less than that of 2016. The profits earned by petroleum products rose by 3% in 2016. Following the same trend earning of Engineered goods went up by 8. 5% which is significantly greater than profits of petroleum products. However, Gem and jewellery seems to be in loss. The excess income have reduced by solid 5. 18%. Furthermore, Agricultural products has shown wee bit raise in profits which is of 0. 81%. It has the lowest earnings amongst all. On the other hand Textile industry tops with a solid 15. 24% growth in income. .
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about oversea trade of a country for various commodities during the years 2015 and 2016. It
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in price of these commodities during two years. The
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is in percentage.

The
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earned by petroleum in 2015 were less than that of 2016.
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The
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earned by petroleum products rose by 3% in 2016. Following the same trend earning of Engineered
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goods
went up by 8. 5% which is
significantly
greater than
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profits
of petroleum products.
However
, Gem and
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jewellery
seems to be in loss. The excess income have
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reduced
by solid 5. 18%.
Furthermore
, Agricultural products has shown wee bit raise in
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profits
which is of 0. 81%. It has the lowest earnings amongst all.
On the other hand
Textile industry tops with a solid 15. 24% growth in income.
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IELTS academic Summarise the information in given chart

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