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The chart illustrates data about the percentage of individuals who putting the latest news by utilizing various types of media in one state in 2013, 2015 and 2015. Overall, It can be clearly seen that television and Internet showed the higher figure in 2013 and 2017

The chart illustrates data about the percentage of individuals who putting the latest news by utilizing various types of media in one state in 2013, 2015 and 2015. Overall, It can be clearly seen that television and Internet showed the higher figure in 2013 and 2017 PWK2E
The chart illustrates data about the percentage of individuals who putting the latest news by utilizing various types of media in one state in 2013, 2015 and 2015. Overall, It can be clearly seen that television and Internet showed the higher figure in 2013 and 2017than the newspapers or radio. With the refernce to, In 2013, the index was the noticeable different in newspapers, It accounted for just above 40percent, compared to 31for Internet. Variation among medias, with the Internet boasting about higher figure at just under 70 in 2017. While the level of television witnessed a great discrepency than the Internet, ranging from 68 to 40 in 2015. In terms of newspapers, there was a sharp decrease in its proportion between 2015 and 2017, standing about 30and 21. Interestingly, the television exceeded by 79 in 2013 whereas its users fallen slightly after 4years, making up 70. On the contrary, during 2015and 2017, the pattern of radio almost unchanged.
The chart illustrates data about the percentage of individuals who putting the latest news by utilizing various types of media in one state in 2013, 2015 and 2015.
Overall
, It can be
clearly
seen
that television and Internet
showed
the higher figure in 2013 and 2017than the newspapers or radio. With the
refernce
to, In 2013, the index was the noticeable
different
in newspapers, It accounted for
just
above 40percent, compared to 31for Internet. Variation among medias, with the Internet boasting about higher figure at
just
under 70 in 2017. While the level of television witnessed a great
discrepency
than the Internet, ranging from 68 to 40 in 2015. In terms of newspapers, there was a sharp decrease in its proportion between 2015 and 2017, standing about 30and 21.
Interestingly
, the television exceeded by 79 in 2013 whereas its users fallen
slightly
after 4years, making up 70.
On the contrary
, during 2015and 2017, the pattern of radio almost unchanged.
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