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What do you think happiness is ?

What do you think happiness is ? OwlP3
Happiness is, above all, a range of emotions: jubilant, excitement and so on. Though happiness means different things to different individuals, there are a few common threads regarding how it should feel. There is small happiness, such as when you are hungry and you are fed; and there is also great happiness after a long period, such as when you have good study outcomes. And the issue is that moment will always pass. Any delight will fades away. For instance, you would be very happy to receive a gift, but you will gradually forget the pleasure of getting it. But being happy does not mean you are happy everywhere or anytime, it has to be discovered and built from the ground up. I believe it is fair to state that happiness is influenced by our behaviors and thoughts, rather than by our circumstances as much as we believe. If you are sad and depressed, you can find a new interest, such as viewing a movie, listening to music, or participating in a new sport. Happiness can also be affected by the people around you. You can't be objective or cheerful if you live in an environment where everyone around you is filled with anxiety and thoughts. In conclusion, happiness prompt a person to be cheerful and always smiling.
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individuals, there are a few common threads regarding how it should feel. There is
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happiness
, such as when you are hungry and you
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happiness
after a long period, such as when you have
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study outcomes. And the issue is that moment will always pass. Any delight will
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fades
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being happy does not mean you are happy everywhere or anytime, it
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be discovered
and built from the ground up. I believe it is
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to state that
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happiness
is influenced
by our behaviors and thoughts,
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than by our circumstances as much as we believe. If you are sad and depressed, you can find a new interest, such as viewing a movie, listening to music, or participating in a new sport.
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can
also
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you. You can't be objective or cheerful if you
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live
in an environment where everyone around you
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happiness
prompt a person to be cheerful and always smiling.
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IELTS academic What do you think happiness is ?

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1 paragraphs
217 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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