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The chart shows the various sports( basketball, swimming, tennis, football, and hockey) preferred by a group of people consisting of hundred adults, boys, and girls. From their responses, it is clear that swimming is the most popular sport among all groups and from these three groups, boys participated in the most number of sports. Of the five sports, the vast majority of the boys chose swimming, football, and basketball. A fair number of boys took part in tennis which was similar to that of girls. While hockey was the only sport not enjoyed by the boys, the highest number of girls participated in the same. Other sports selected by girls were swimming and basketball. However, only a small number, approximately 10 of the 100, went for football. Meanwhile, when it comes to the adults surveyed, the two most popular sports were swimming and tennis, with hockey being the least popular. Football, hockey, and basketball were all favored less by the adults.
The chart
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the various sports
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basketball
, swimming, tennis, football, and hockey) preferred by a group of
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people
consisting of hundred adults,
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boys
, and girls.

From their responses, it is
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that swimming is the most popular
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among all groups and from these three groups,
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boys
participated in the most
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number
of sports.

Of the five
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, the vast majority of the
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boys
chose swimming, football, and
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basketball
. A
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fair
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boys
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took part
in tennis which was similar to that of girls. While hockey was the
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sport
not enjoyed by the
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boys
, the highest
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of girls participated in the same. Other
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selected by girls were swimming and
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basketball
.
However
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, approximately 10 of the 100, went for football.

Meanwhile, when it
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to the adults surveyed, the two most popular
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were swimming and tennis, with hockey being the least popular. Football, hockey, and
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basketball
were all favored less by the adults.
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IELTS academic sprots preffered by girls

Academic
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4 paragraphs
161 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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