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The table below gives information about MBA Graduates from 5 universities from 2005 to 2008.

The table below gives information about MBA Graduates from 5 universities from 2005 to 2008. Owlrk
The data provides information on how many students from MBA faculty from 5 different universities over a 4-year period. Overall, it can be seen that the total number of MBA graduates increased by 12. 2% from 645 people to 724 people. The percentage of graduates from most universities presented a variation; however, only New York university declined. Over 4 years, the greatest percentage growth was found in Yale by 37. 1 percent, by rising from 132 people in 2005 to 181 people in 2008, meanwhile, graduated from California university witnessed the lowest climb by almost two percent between 2 years. At the same time, the number of graduates from Harvard and Ohio moderately varied from 150 people to 185 people and 88 people to 102 people, respectively. On the other hand, from the year 2005 to 2008, New York university graduates experienced a reduction, compared with other four universities. Students who graduated from New York university slightly eased by 20 people, which accounted for -9. 5%.
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in 2005 to 181
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in 2008, meanwhile, graduated from California
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witnessed the lowest climb by almost two percent between 2 years. At the same time, the number of
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experienced a reduction, compared with other four
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IELTS academic The table below gives information about MBA Graduates from 5 universities from 2005 to 2008.

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