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the tendency of people is to copy one another is shown in the popularity of fashion in clothes and other goods. do you agree or disagree.

the tendency of people is to copy one another is shown in the popularity of fashion in clothes and other goods. BLYa9
In this modern era, People try to look better than others. In this competition, they start copying each others fashion sense. However, I partially agree to the given statement. This essay intends to discuss the view further. This is the supporting statement for individuals who opine that human beings copy one another. To commence with, growing standars leads to increased demand of clothing and accessory. People earn to improve their standard of living thats why they follow various fashion influencers and try to copy them. Also, entertainment industry have a great role in this trend as individuals try to copy actors and singers. To put an example, a versace dress copy weared by dipika padukon is now sold in many local markets and preferred by several individuals. Those who disagreed with the given statement give their points as follows. First, more people are indulging towards western culture. Consequently, they wear same kind of clothes and follow similar fashion sense. Moreover, markets are also loaded with the same variety of clothes so its not necessary that they copy others. For instance, a designer dress weared by a celebrity has now 100 copies in local markets and it is now purchased by numerous people. As a result, similar trendy clothes can be seen in several places. To summraise, it cannot be denied that people are influenced by each other but popularity of fashion is so high that a designer makes 20 copies of a dress and this is the result of same fashion sense.
In this modern era,
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People
try to look better than others. In this competition, they
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start
copying each others
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fashion
sense.
However
, I
partially
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agree
to the
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given
statement. This essay intends to discuss the view
further
. This is the supporting statement for individuals who opine that human beings
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copy
one another. To commence with, growing
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standars
leads to increased demand of clothing and accessory.
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People
earn to
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improve
their standard of living
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thats
why they follow various
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fashion
influencers and try to
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copy
them.
Also
, entertainment industry have a great role in this trend as individuals try to
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copy
actors and singers. To put an example, a
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versace
dress
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copy
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weared
by
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dipika
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padukon
is
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now
sold in
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many
local markets and preferred by several individuals. Those who disagreed with the
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given
statement give their points as follows.
First
, more
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people
are indulging towards western culture.
Consequently
, they wear same kind of clothes and follow similar
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fashion
sense.
Moreover
, markets are
also
loaded with the same variety of clothes
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so
its not necessary that they
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copy
others.
For instance
, a designer dress
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weared
by a celebrity has
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now
100
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copies
in local markets and it is
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now
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purchased
by numerous
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people
.
As a result
, similar trendy clothes can be
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seen
in several places. To
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summraise
, it cannot
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that
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people
are influenced
by each
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other
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but
popularity of
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fashion
is
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so
high that a designer
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makes
20
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copies
of a dress and this is the result of same
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fashion
sense.
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IELTS academic the tendency of people is to copy one another is shown in the popularity of fashion in clothes and other goods.

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