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Weekly earning of full-time graduate employees by type of degree and age

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The graph illustrates how much income was gained in 2002 per week by 3 types of graduates (with a degree, postgraduates and with other qualifications), who are also divided in 8 groups by age in a range from 21 to 60 years. Units are measured in pound sterling. Overall, the earnings of the youngest employees (21-25) are the lowest for all three degrees. The highest wages are received by graduates with other types of qualification in about age of 38. Also, higher degree employees gained the largest income in the oldest category (56-60). In terms of salaries of graduates with other qualifications and higher degree, they show a stable rise in the group 21-25 from more or less £400, but after around 32 postgraduate employees’ salary growth is less dramatic. While wage of other-qualification-graduates' hit its peak at the age 36-40, income of higher degree workers reaches one of the highest points at 41-45 (slightly above £800 and approximately £750 respectively). Exact same earnings are achieved by these two groups in somewhere between ages 46-55. Thus, income of others continues to dip stably, but salary of postgraduates goes upwards dramatically, reaching its apex marginally under £800. On the other hand, fist degree graduates earn the lowest amount of money around £350 in the youngest group. After growing gradually, their salary hit the highest point depicted as a plateau just under £700 in ages approximately 37-43. Then it goes down and shows rising tendency from extremely under £700 until the end.
The graph illustrates how much
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income
was gained
in 2002 per week by 3 types of
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graduates
(with a
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degree
, postgraduates and with
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other
qualifications), who are
also
divided in 8
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groups
by
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age
in a range from 21 to 60 years. Units
are measured
in pound sterling.

Overall
, the earnings of the youngest employees (21-25) are the lowest for all three
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degrees
. The highest wages
are received
by
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graduates
with
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other
types of qualification in about
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age
of 38.
Also
, higher
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degree
employees gained the largest
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income
in the oldest category (56-60).

In terms of
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salaries
of
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graduates
with
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other
qualifications and higher
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degree
, they
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show
a stable rise in the
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group
21-25 from more or less £400,
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after around 32 postgraduate employees’
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salary
growth is less dramatic. While wage of other-qualification-graduates' hit its peak at the
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age
36-40,
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income
of higher
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degree
workers reaches one of the highest points at 41-45 (
slightly
above £800 and approximately £750
respectively
). Exact same earnings
are achieved
by these two
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groups
in somewhere between
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ages
46-55.
Thus
,
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income
of others continues to dip
stably
,
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but
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salary
of postgraduates goes upwards
dramatically
, reaching its apex
marginally
under £800.

On the
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other
hand, fist
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degree
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graduates
earn the lowest amount of money around £350 in the youngest
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group
. After growing
gradually
, their
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salary
hit the highest point depicted as a plateau
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just
under £700 in
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ages
approximately 37-43. Then it goes down and
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shows
rising tendency from
extremely
under £700 until the
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end
.
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IELTS academic Weekly earning of full-time graduate employees by type of degree and age

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